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I've translated an agreement from Arabic into English.
The following expression: يتم التسليم في أجل خمسة أشهر من تاريخ فتح رسالة الاعتماد، إلا في حالة تأخير من طرف المشتري في الأجال الجمركية وإنهاء أشغال الهندسة المدنية.
I've translated as: The delivery will be completed within 5 months from the date of opening the lett... See more
Good morning,
I've translated an agreement from Arabic into English.
The following expression: يتم التسليم في أجل خمسة أشهر من تاريخ فتح رسالة الاعتماد، إلا في حالة تأخير من طرف المشتري في الأجال الجمركية وإنهاء أشغال الهندسة المدنية.
I've translated as: The delivery will be completed within 5 months from the date of opening the letter of credit. The exception is when the Buyer will be late in the customs dealines and completing civil engineering works.
The customer insists that this translation isn't correct and instead of "The exception is" should be something closer to "For example".
Could you please tell me whether my translations is correct?
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ahmadwadan.com Saudi Arabia Local time: 03:12 English to Arabic + ...
My input
Jan 20, 2014
Apart from whether it is correct or not I would use "....unless there is a delay..." and make it once sentence instead of starting a new sentence with "The exception is".
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Tim Friese United States Local time: 19:12 Member (2013) Arabic to English + ...
Agree with Ahmad
Jan 20, 2014
Your translation could be rephrased for style but is basically accurate. It is certainly better than the 'correction' which is a clear error.
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BKTranslatio (X) Germany Local time: 02:12 English to Arabic + ...
For example...
Jan 20, 2014
I don't think it would be appropriate to use " For example "...but if your customer insists, take the advice of Ahmad "...unless there is a delay..." and when you finish, just put " for example" followed by a point " The delivery will be completed within 5 months from the date of opening the letter of credit unless there is a delay caused by the Buyer in the customs dealines and (in) the completion of civil engineering wor... See more
I don't think it would be appropriate to use " For example "...but if your customer insists, take the advice of Ahmad "...unless there is a delay..." and when you finish, just put " for example" followed by a point " The delivery will be completed within 5 months from the date of opening the letter of credit unless there is a delay caused by the Buyer in the customs dealines and (in) the completion of civil engineering works FOR EXAMPLE.
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